I'm so excited!!! I rearranged the entire 100 pages and it is AWESOME! Everything fits together so much better now. Weird that I didn't see this earlier. Well, to be honest, I did. I knew _something_ was off, but I couldn't put my finger on it.
Now when I read the pages, it feels like a story -- no sudden jars between scenes...it just...FLOWS.
And I have a pretty clear vision on the next 100 pages or so. Just need to get down and dirty and start working on them.
I think I'm still on track to finish by the end of the month...we'll see. :)